Making Every Word Count
Posted on Wednesday, October 30, 2019 at 11:18 PM
There are certain qualities that can go a long way to bringing an
author's message to our readers.
By Denise Gable
A
good editor’s job is so much more than fixing grammar or correcting
errors. As editors we are the main link between the writer and the
reader. That's true whether we're talking about words on paper or on the
screens of digital devices. We create the connection.
According
to Editors Only's Peter P. Jacobi, "Success for an editor comes
through a thorough and sensitive knowledge of just who a publication's
reader is. It comes from the editor's understanding of what a given
writer is all about, what the subjects written of really means, and what
language can do to give a certain jolt to the reader."
Necessary
Attributes
Anna Yeadell-Moore, an editor in the Netherlands,
proposes these five essential qualities of a good editor:
1. A
good editor does not have an ego.
2. A good editor will be brutally
honest with [writers], and will treat [them] and [their] work with
respect.
3. A good editor has an obsessive eye for detail and is
sensitive to inconsistencies.
4. A good editor will make sure that
every sentence counts and is structurally sound.
5. A good editor can
explain, in detail, the reason why every change is made.
Beyond
those qualities, however, there are practical techniques that can help
us accomplish our mission.
Nurturing
Jacobi
emphasizes that an editor has an important role as a nurturer. He
explains:
"An editor can be an article's staunchest friend,
loving the peace into existence, if the writer permits it and if an
editor knows what his or her job is truly all about.
"Not too
different all this from what Scott Russell Sanders writes of in an
essay, "The Inheritance of Tools," his reverential reverie about
childhood and father and craftsmanship. He recalls:
My
cobbled-together guitars might have been alien spaceships, my barns
might have been models of Aztec temples, each wooden contraption might
have been anything but what I had set out to make.
Now and again
I would feel the need to have a chunk of wood shaped or shortened before
I riddled it with nails, and I would clamp it in a vise and scrape it
with a handsaw. My father would let me lacerate the board until my arm
gave out, and then he would wrap his hand around mine and help me finish
the cut, showing me how to use my thumb to guide the blade, how to pull
back on the saw to keep it from binding, how to let my shoulder do the
work.
Jacobi continues: "‘Don’t foresee it,' he would say.
‘Just drag it easy and give the teeth a chance to bite.'
"That
often becomes an editor's dictum. It's advice for the writer so that the
reader can be cornered and won over.
"It's the father at work,
suggesting that without changes, a writer's verbally cobbled-together
guitar might, indeed, be misread as a spaceship. Like a father, the
editor says: 'This doesn't work. Let's see why not.' That's a step
beyond evaluation. That's support. That's mature.
"Much to ask,
but good editors know it comes with the territory.
"They know
still more is required to bring writer and reader together in the pages
of a publication."
Being Passionate
Silvia
Justino, a Brazilian editorial director, told Media Associates
International that she regards passion as an important quality for
editors. She says:
"Passion is a fundamental quality of an
effective editor. Passion is what stimulates an editor’s growth and
development of needed qualities and skills. After all, the editor does
more than correct grammar and spelling (as important as this is). The
editor is passionate about attaining a final manuscript that is
stylistically pleasing, elegant and true to the author’s voice."
Justino
doesn't believe that an editor must necessarily be born with editorial
passion. But that passion must be reflected in a person's satisfaction
in their work, she claims.
But Beware
There is a
potential downside, Justino warns: “Passion does pose one danger,
however: perfectionism. As I see it, not every perfectionist is
passionate about what he or she does, but every passionate person is a
perfectionist. We must be careful to avoid extremes, because excesses
are harmful. For instance, the exaggeratedly perfectionist editor will
never be satisfied that a manuscript is truly finished -- becoming a
victim of the ‘unfinished syndrome.’ Finding the proper balance is key
to every passionate writer, editor or other professional. We must
discuss this challenge openly with our fellow editors, and especially
with the less experienced ones."
Mentoring
Imparting
wisdom is an important role for us as editors. Jacobi suggests offering
writers the opportunity for that. He believes writers would be wise to
heed such editorial advice.
To illustrate this, Jacobi offers a
hypothetical example wherein the editor tells the writer, "This article
needs suspense, a rolling, roiling movement toward climax, a sense of
the ticking clock, of time running out." Jacobi explains, "When the
editor does so, the writer should acknowledge that urgency is missing in
an article which lives or dies, depending on whether or not that needed
tension can be inserted sufficiently and naturally."
How
would that play out? Jacobi offers three suggestions for the editor to
tell the writer:
--"Make me hear and see and feel. Bring me
close." And when the editor does so, the writer should respond with
enlivened verbiage, most likely spiced up usage of the right now nouns
and the collaborating strong verbs.
--"Listen to the music of
your voice." And when the editor does so, the writer should seek euphony
in what year she has written. Seek and find, or seek and not find and
create.
--"Don't squeeze the idea. Let it breathe." And when the
editor does so, the writer should air out the scope of his piece, give
its conceptual and informational space while not wasting it.
So
there we have three themes: nurturing, being passionate, and mentoring.
They can go a long way toward fulfilling our obligation: to play a
practical and constructive role in bringing an author's message to our
readers.
Denise Gable is managing editor of Editors Only.
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